| yeah, i so hope you are one of those writers who update ALOT, cause i am so hooked on this fic now. can't wait for the next update, great plot so far interested to see if it pans out like i think it should.
| I normally don't like stories that send her into the future leaving Sesshoumaru to have to suffer through 500 years to see her again. But with the way the plot is going by her being pregnant and Inuyasha being with her as a supportive friend, keeps my interest and fuels my enjoyment in the story. I just wish you had included a little more on Inuyasha's thoughts at being trapped in the future and his adjustment to passing as human. Also, I hope she and Sesshoumaru meet up again while she's still carrying his pup. Should he not be able to feel something through the mark she gave him?
katlady (Chapter 4) - Fri 26 Jun 2009
| okay now that I have caught up to chapter 4 UPDATE!!! this is really good
katlady (Chapter 2) - Fri 26 Jun 2009
| ::blushes:: my bad I am so sleep I thought I read this as a one shot hahah any whoooooooooooooooooooooo
katlady (Chapter 1) - Fri 26 Jun 2009
| in all honestly this is hot too hot to be a one shot you should do another chapter besides don't dog heats last a few days :gins evilly:
stars (Chapter 4) - Fri 26 Jun 2009
| please updata sooner this time. but I love it
| Yay, thanks for the update!
I like how you put the 'youkai clinic' into the picture, and is it more than just a coincidence that Kagome's mother can never make it to Kagome's appointments or is it just me? Also how did Inu get a job so quickly? I have tones of other questions too but i do enjoy a bit of mystery, and this story is full of it!! So for now i'll simply say i'm enjoying your story and thanks for another interesting chapter and i can't wait for the next one!!
| Oh, this is sooo good! Please, write more...
AW555 (Chapter 1) - Fri 26 Jun 2009
| Oooo XD I like it! I look forward to the next update! Keep up the good work!
| Hey I love the story "Safety in Deadly Arms" and was wondering if you were going to add to it. I have enjoyed your wording that paints a in depth picture of setting, emotion, and character! Please keep up the excellent writing.
Brandi
Hey! I just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying your story, and I hope you keep up the great work!
~Aubrey
| Hee... hee... (dang you got me doing the dots) anyway I got a sneak peak and figured it was only fair to review. I give you many cookies for a job well done. I hope this turns out okay.
| I love this story, I'm so glad you decided to make it longer. Now I hope you make it really long! This is just turning out so awesome, and I can't wait for the next upadate...
LC Rose (Chapter 3) - Tue 26 May 2009
| "You spent the whole damn night with him-are you going to tell me that his eyes didn't bleed red even once?" he hissed."
I loved that line! And the story is taking off... Dun, dun, dun...Baby troubles!! Can't wait to see where you take us next.
LC
LC Rose (Chapter 1) - Tue 26 May 2009
| Very nice lemon and I must admit I was gleefully surprised that it was Kouga chasing her instead of Inuyasha. Now onto the next chapter... I have a hunch where this is going. ;-)
Whoa...this story is amazing Angel good job!
jojo661538 (Chapter 2) - Mon 20 Apr 2009
| i think this was okay its better than just saying and they had sex all night long or next morning...it gives the reader an idea of what went on keep up the good work ^_^
Brights (Chapter 2) - Thu 16 Apr 2009
Yay! I'm so happy you decided to continue with your story! Damn! Inuyasha just had to burst in and ruin their fun! XD I really liked how Sesshy dropped his frigid personality and became almost playful with Kags during their...pleasurable activities. ^__^ I can't wait for the next chapter and see where the plot will be headed. Please update soon for I will be waiting! : )
The lemony goodness was super hot!!LoL
But i like how your going to give this a plot, and i also think you ended it at the right part! So far i've enjoyed what i've read and i think your a talented writer!
Look forward to the next one! Keep up the good work!!!
| I love it! XD
I loved all the random love scenes. Very amusing. Can't wait to see how it developes.
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