*cries at the happy ending* That was so beautiful *sniffle*, how dare you make me cry... stupid hormones...
I have to be honest. I loved the story until the last chapter. He abandoned her for three years and then just drops back in like nothing happened. Since, unfortunately, she is still left with her human lifespan, he lost being with her those three years. She could have enjoyed those years traveling with him. Instead, she spends them in misery. He evidently did not want her with him so why does he want her now? She's a lot more forgiving than I would be.
I'm sorry, but that last chapter just put me in a bad frame of mind.
*sniff* so beautiful.
So sad to see this end. So well written and such a great story!
Hope to see more from you.
That was the BEST fanfiction I have ever read in my life!
I cried so hard!
This is possibly the best Sesshoumaru/Kagome I have read in recent memory. It is definitely the most well-written. Amazing, astounding job. Everyone in character, plot development was extraordinarily well thought and drawn out, and the exquisite pain of the ending was superb. Brava, bravissima. Thank you for the tale. I look forward to future efforts of your pen.
Bravo! Brava! Mucho excellente! SUPER UBER AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very nicely written.
That was...magnificent. And worth every tear I shed over it. Thank you.
Adriana (Chapter 22) - Sun 02 May 2010
OMG. This story is absolutely beautiful. This is deffinately one of my new favorites and I'll probably read it again sometime. :D And I'll probably enjoy it even more than I did this time. Thank you so much for writing it. :)
I loved this story !!!! They story was beautiful and the inspiration to it was the gift that you have. I enjoyed reading it and I hope you will continue to writing more stories . I huge fan
Karli (Chapter 22) - Sun 02 May 2010
Im Going to miss reading this over my morning coffee, a Beauiful and Sad story. Loved reading every minute of it.
Here, Trouble, this is for you. *Hands Trouble her bleeding, weeping heart* You tore it right out of my chest with this story. You cost me a box of Puffs - a BIG box of Puffs. But it is SUCH a GOOD story! And listening to Celine Dion's song just made the tears fall faster and thicker. I'm surprised I'm not covered with mold after all the tears I've shed throughout this whole story.
You are a truly superlative writer. Your characters have depth and complexity, your plot is original and fresh. You've given fanfiction a whole new definition for me.
Thank you for writing.
butterflydragon (Chapter 22) - Sun 02 May 2010
Beautiful story--read along every day and was moved. Excellent story, excellent writing, and it was all the little touches you added that made this story so real. Like the tag itching, or the pearl earrings. I cant wait to read more from you!
Cinne (Chapter 22) - Sun 02 May 2010
Wow. There is absolutely nothing I can say that would do justice to this story. I cried so many times. Good crying! <333333
SaraSama1 (Chapter 1) - Sun 02 May 2010
It was beautiful, from start to finish. I was entranced and looked forward to this story as a daily read. I'm so grateful that you finished it.
Thank you
Beautiful... Thank you again.
T_T It's the end...Huhu well I'm glad it ended nicely for Kagome and the song was my fave. Still have it in my laptop. XD Gosh, this story was good. It's been fun following it. There's no words to describe it now.
What an amazing story! I loved it! Good Job!!!
:] Yay Happy Ending!
fatcatmom (Chapter 22) - Sun 02 May 2010
The manga thing was a bit of a plot contrivence, but it actually worked into a very satisfying conclusion to this epic tale of finding your soul. Absolute perfection of allegory when Sess touched his long hair, signifying he had found his place in the world. And Kagome was on such a roller-coaster -- she had lost everything and then gained it and so much more back. The song was perfect! Thanks for writing this story and please write another one soon. You've got a fan in me!
dayna (Chapter 22) - Sun 02 May 2010
What a wonderful ending to such a wonderful story. I wasnt expecting her to move to the United States but I'm actually glad that she did. If I was her I would have done the same thing. Fresh new , start for a new life.
I almost cried when Sessy came back and after all this time even I realize that concept of embracing the silence.
I wish it wasnt over but I know that whatever other wonderful story ideas you come up with will be just as amazing as this story.
I will always be a fan of yours.
Dayna
Wow...two chapter in a row that had me crying my eyes out... such a beautiful story.
Wonderful story, and some good advice int here too.
Life's too short to waste.
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