AWWWWWW! I cried you a river, Miss T. This was so touching and beautiful. My eyes were raining bullets just now. Wonderful job, lovely. ♥
Oh!! *wipes away tears* I feel a whirlwind of emotions right now!!! I feel happy that Kagome let go of her insecurities to be with Sesshomaru, sad because of Sesshy's hardships, and angry that the operation was a failure! T_T Such an emotional roller coaster! I nearly died when Sesshy dropped to the ground near the end of the story, tears and disappointment as well as slight desperation... I wanted to jump into the the computer screen and wrap my arms around the poor Sessh and tell him that I want to see the color of love too! *bawls and bawls*
On a lighter note, I vaguely remember seeing this story somewhere... Though I can't put my finger on it... Was it on Spark? Well, at any rate, this was a tear-jerking, yet beautiful and insightful story. AMAZING, midear! You never fail in making me have me making some out-loud reaction or sitting on the edge of my seat reading your words. T^T
Haley! (Chapter 1) - Tue 20 Jul 2010
Oh wow, that was one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. you have some grammar mistakes, but it's still very good. if you'd like I can proofread it for you, as I really love and would like to see it perfected.
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*squeals* Oooooooo.....so beautiful!!!!
Miss Teak I want to thank you for writing and sharing this with everyone. it was beyond beautiful and heartwarming. you are so amazing! thank you.
Taiyoukai assassin (Chapter 1) - Sun 18 Jul 2010
I'm an author from ff.net and I dont' even know where to begin to describe how beautiful this awesome piece of writing this is. Please comtinue writing I'd love to see more.
Happy and sad, that is bittersweet.
This is beautiful. I really love it. Excellent work. ^_^
Amy (Chapter 1) - Sat 17 Jul 2010
I LOVE FAIRYTALES!
I love this. Im not usely one for oneshots but i love it
Kanna37 (Chapter 1) - Sat 17 Jul 2010
AWWW! That was so sweet it made me CRY! And I don't do that much anymore - tears have been burned out of me.
Amber
Oooohh~ I've read this on FF.net ~
It's a wonderful story. So touching T.T
I read it after reading The Third Parties and I felt I just had to read more of your works!
A friend of mine joined a school pageant and the question that made her win the crown was "How would you describe the color "red" to your blind boyfriend?" And she answered: "Red is the color of passion, compassion and love". And this story brought me back to that wonderful pageant night where I also started thinking about how can I desrcibe certain things to a blind person.
I am soooo in love with your style in writing and your stories! They're so original and heart warming that it also makes me want to experience those kinds of love stories. It's rare for authors to have the ability to touch a person's heart through writing and the emotions you wanted to portray are so alive in your stories~
I don't have an account on FF.net so I couldn't leave a review there. So here I am! XD
Tsuki (Chapter 1) - Sat 17 Jul 2010
That was so beautiful, :) It's even better than the first time I read it!! It made me cry both times :)
You write beautifully!!
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