How could you abandon it here?!?! I need more! I need the rest of the story!

This is an amazing story but it left off at such a major turning point. Had it been abandoned or is it continued on another site? Can the Godai Inus take on an Inu form? How powerful is Kagome going to be? I really would love to read more of this

Omg please you MUST update I ADORE your writing!!! I've never laughed and reared up so much!!! Please get on and update soon!!!????????

being outside of your body must be creepy. your voice holds no sway. i wonder who induced this state and why they wanted her to see it....if it was naraku. what purpose would this encounter serve

Great chapter. I so totally remember watching Alex mack when I was younger. Thought it would be totally cool to be able to change into a water like substance. Jealous of kagomes power lol

Keep it coming.

Ahhhhhh! You updated YAY! LOVED the new chapter! Please update soon! 

is there more or a seuqle it jsut can't end liek that it can't!

Awww...... Shippo is gonna end up blaming his self isn't he? :'( And he didn't get to eat his meal to begin his growth spurt. Please update ASAP! Love this story. My only complaint so far is that I think the relationship between Sesshomaru and Kagome was kind of rushed. But I still enjoyed reading it though. I just wish that there were a few more intimate interactions or alone time between them before they became mates.

Excellent job explaining Shippo's maturity.  The unique way that Naraku took hold of Kagome was great also.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  I'm eager to see what kind of monster Naraku birthed with Kagura.

Keep it coming.

Love this story, I rea it on fanfiction.

Do I see a budding relationship between Inuyasha and Kaede even though they're at each other's throat for the moment? They always start off when both are pissed at each other. I love it. I'm wondering about the whole thing with Kagura's adult spawn. Hmm, interestinger and interestinger. Want more.

Great handful of chapters the matting was hot I waskinda hoping keadie kick Inuyasha ass!!! Can't wait until the next chapters please update soon!!!!

hello,

I like this story.  it is well done.  I can't wait to see what happens next. 

good job and update soon...

:-)

Love the story, read it on fanfiction and here.

awe! poor kagura! and yEy for updates! I'm going to have to re-read this fiction again! while i remember a lot of it, details are missing :3 either way good update ^_^

It's good. I'm not really a fan of Kagome-turned-demon stories but you actually did a really good job at making it realistic. I love how you made Kaede and Kikyo the older sisters of Kagome but didn't make it so Kikyo was a bitch (meaning cliched and boring).

Could you possibly send me an update when you finish the chapters? Either though an inbox via my account or email me via [email protected].

Great story I really love can't wait until the next chapters.!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!??????????????????????????????

Hey!I think the concept of ur story is really good and you write really well. I love how you portray Kagome and make her a powerful being with a big heart. I think at times the story drags because you write very much in depth about the Godou Youkai and expand on Kagome's mom's explanation. I think Kagome being back to the future and talking with her mom could have spanned one chapter instead of two and three. Its hard for readers to keep up with a story if it doesn't have significant action per chapter. Although Kagome's inner musings give an idea to the reader about how the character feels, I think you can get the same point across with  more dialogue and less "inner thoughts/dreams", which would help to move the story along and make it easier to read. I do really like your story and I only actually give reviews like these to fanfiction that I think have a lot of potential, so I hope you see this at what it is, constructive criticism/ suggestions so you can make your already good writing even better. Thanks for writing and good luck!