Oh how I love a happy and giddy Kagome. Isn't that how all we girls get when a guy we like likes us back??? I also like that Sessh is nervous too. I, like Kagome, was wondering why he didn't call sooner and I also think like her that maybe he would have thought it too bold of her to call him first, but I am old fashion that way. And what is Jak up to? Hope he doesn't get near Sesshoumaru. He'll think twice about Miroku if he sees him and all that pretty hair. Anyway, I'm off for now, see you when there's a few more to keep me happy. JEN
Ok, so it's been awhile and you've been busy haven't you? I like coming back to alot of new posts. (especially with these type fics)
Now, I've got to say, you have done one spectacular thing when you've put Jakotsu in a fic! How good are you at his charcter, hmm?? Well, I guess I'm going to find out! His first appearance was right on que! It was just so Jakotsu! (now do the girly hand thing) I really like Sango getting a promotion. I'm just wondering, hmmm...how is Kouga going to get mixed up in Sessh and Kagome's "business arrangement"? Unless I'm mistaken, Kouga always has a thing for Kagome. I wonder if I'm going to be right?
Now, on to more reading. JEN
Keep it coming.
rose (Chapter 23) - Fri 09 Aug 2013
next chapter please
rose (Chapter 22) - Thu 08 Aug 2013
next chapter pleae
Both chapters are awesome, keep it coming.
rose (Chapter 19) - Wed 07 Aug 2013
next chapter please
Can't get enough, keep it coming.
I see things are progressing well for our main couple. I'm looking forward to their meeting on Saturday! Jakotsu and Miroku? LOL
Now that's an interesting pairing, Kaoru-chan! Is this your entry for the weird couple challenge? Or are you hiding another one...like say Sango-Kouga? Cause I would like that couple very much. XD
Update when you can, love. :)
All six chapters are awesome, keep it coming.
rose (Chapter 16) - Mon 05 Aug 2013
next chapter please
All three chapters are cool, keep it coming.
I am really loving this story so far~ I can't wait for there meet up!
Haven (Chapter 10) - Sat 03 Aug 2013
This is really adorable. Can't wait until they meet!
I like this story so far. keep up the updates
Very nice chapters. I like the flow of the story so far. I'm impressed with the way you found to explain their unusual coloring. It was a nice touch! Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to the couple's first meeting along with a family member from each side. I wonder who would go in Kagome's case...probably her mother, but it would be amusing if her grandfather accompanied her instead. XD
Also, I'm not sure if this will help you or not, but usually Japanese people would say 'osewa ni natte orimasu' with a small bow which translates as 'we are under your care' or 'thank you for taking care of us' in polite speech when someone performs a service for them. Onegai shimasu is certainly an acceptable term for 'please' as well. If you wish, you could have also used the more polite way which is 'onegai itashimasu'. Anyway, I won't bore you with Japanese formal and informal speech patterns any longer. Honestly, 'keigo' gives me a headache as well and I don't use it often as it's recommended for business or university related matters mostly. My Japanese friends would think I was trying to put distance between us if I spoke to them in keigo cause it's too formal and respectful. XD
Excellent work. I see you have another who likes to inform when needed. Stella is a very gifted writer.(if it's the same girl) I enjoed your background on all the candidates. I'll be looking in again soon. JEN
Loving both chapters, keep it coming.
Great story, keep it coming.
Riccie4 (Chapter 5) - Thu 01 Aug 2013
Cute start, can't wait to see how everything turns out.
Happy Writing ^_^
Page 9 of 10
| | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | |