Great story plot but you have a lot of spelling errors that if proof read would make the the story a lot better than its current form.I would suggest you have somebody to beta for you.The story has potential.
Nice chapter, keep it coming Happy Thanksgiving!
candy (Chapter 13) - Thu 27 Nov 2014
I like a lot can't wait for more.
i really liked the chapter
babyBlue (Chapter 11) - Sat 27 Sep 2014
AWww Sesshomaru. Loved it
babyBlue (Chapter 12) - Sat 27 Sep 2014
OMG. Loved this chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.
Sesshomaru you better fight for ur woman
Loveyaa (Chapter 12) - Sat 27 Sep 2014
Uh oh! Good and bad things happening. I'm thinking that that conversation should happen after she gives birth, just maybe. I can't wait to see what happens next especially with Naraku's still out there and more desperate than ever :)
No! She is Sesshomaru's! Was the male even looking for her? He needs to stay away from Kagome!
What is next? Please i need to know!
monserrat (Chapter 12) - Fri 26 Sep 2014
I like your story i want to know what happens next
tonya (Chapter 12) - Thu 25 Sep 2014
love the update! please update soon as you can
candy (Chapter 12) - Thu 25 Sep 2014
Its good I want to read more.
awww now that is sweet
Loveyaa (Chapter 10) - Tue 05 Aug 2014
Uh oh...well we found out who the spy was pretending to be. Poor Mai, and now poor Kagome. Not always the smoothest, but you're getting better with it all. I can't wait to see what happens next and how freaked Sesshoumaru is gonna be :)
tonya (Chapter 10) - Mon 04 Aug 2014
cant wait to see what happens next
Sailor Moon new anime has already aired two episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube and episode 3 of Sailor Moon Crystal aired yesterday. Great chapter, keep it coming
UP DATE SOONER I WANT MORE!!!
I love the smut scene, great job! For it being your first lemon, you did good! I like how she came to her senses afterwards. I like that there's attraction between the two. I cant wait to see how this comes together. Sorry for the late review! Keep the good work! :-)
Amanda (Chapter 9) - Sun 25 May 2014
Wooo, I loved this chapter. Can´t wait to see wre you take the story next.
Wonder whats going on with the other characters
Hope you update soon, i want to know. lol . loved it
Loveyaa (Chapter 9) - Tue 20 May 2014
That was quick, but I guess when you know you know. I wonder how this mysterious evil will get to Kagome now. Also is the same evil that got wanted the pup (Narku), the same that tried to take Kagome's beast? I can't wait to see what happens next with no rush to get that smoother read :)
Crazy end, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
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