This story is really good so far. I can't wait to see what happen next. Please update soon!

I love you story!!! I can't wait for the next installment!!!!!!

I gather some sort of transformation is taking place and this horrible enemy is actually her grandfather. Creepy.

wow! I have read many a fan fic and have been hard pressed to find one as masterly spun as this. I particularaly love the way you handled the character conflict between Kagome and Inuyasha. I was afraid after reading so many that it would be porely constructed. However, you did not disapoint me. You have managed to spin a intoxicating tale while still sticking close to some of the truths that the original anime portrayed. In short...I LOVE IT!! I love how you have conected Kagome to an inu lord as a sire, and I love that she has new and untold abilities. I have found this a pleasure to read. The only thing I would change is her interaction wth her "children." She dosent seem to spend as much time with them as I believe she would desire to, that and her dealings with Sesshoumaru leave much to be wanted. I have to commend you though. This is by far one of the greates I have read. I look forward to seein you next chapter....Is there any way you can put them out faster? I think im addicted. :P

Your story has literally been the savior of my sanity over the past three days. You've worked in a wonderful amount of detail and plot layering, of which has been thoroughly enjoyed on my part. Needless to say, I cannot wait until your next update! Definitely a new favorite on my list - well-done and keep up the great work!

Someone in the Kag/Sess yahoo group let us know you were updating your fanfics. I have not seen you on there and I was wondering if you would inform me when you update, please? I'm quickly falling in love with your story. I've noticed your grammar getting better with every chapter, especially after your hiatus.
I read that many people think Kagome is pregnant and until the last chapter I was inclined to agree with them. Now my question is: Is Kagome aquiring her own beast? Is she going to shift forms? Or is she turning more demon then human? I can't wait to find out!
Also, please email me if you require any more betaing skills. [email protected]

Another very well-written, exciting chapter. After waiting so long and rereading what there was of the story several times, I'm so happy that you've come back! Rarely does a story with a long hiatus get completed, even if the writer is fine and well, they often lose interest... I'm glad, and I know thousands of others are very, very glad that you are back..

Now.. please update quickly; I am very bad at cliffhangers, I need to know what happens next!

Million dollar question: Is Kagome pregnant? If such is the case I can't see Sesshy letting her out to fight much from now on. This chapter was great! I loved seeing Kagome take command and step up. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great writing.

This story is so good! Thank you for updating! Please update again soon, I'm dying to know what's going to happen next.

please update....

the story flows great...

Welcome back .. I had despaired of this being completed, telling myself that a positive resolution -- at least, insofar as Sesshoumaru and Kagome were concerned -- was implied by the prior chapter.

I'm very glad that you are writing again; this story was a favorite at the time I read it months ago, and I look forward to reading the rest of it in whatever time frame you complete it in.

You handled the romantic/passionate element wonderfully -- it conveyed what it needed to convey well; now I wonder what exactly it is (it is pretty clear, I think, although it could be a plot twist) what exactly is causing Kagome's nausea..

I can't wait to see th rest of it. Very well done and I know that there are so many of us who had long hoped you would return. Truly, welcome back!

yay new chap... awesome... sessh and kag are together.... love the part when kag was waking up... very funny..... great job.... hopefully we don't have to wait too long for your next update... keep up the good work.... thanks for updating and not forgetting about your readers....

UPDATE. SOON. UPDATE. SOON. UPDATE. SOON:( Please

i absolutely LOVE this story, it has kept me holding my breath throughout the whole thing. can't wait for an update!

I was about time you updated finally I love this chapter! I would like to say you have a skill in writing and keep at it!!! CAN"T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! ;);)

You updated! You updated! You updated! I hope you an tell how happy I am that you have updated this wonderful story! I liked this chapter quite a bit, but did have a small question for you: Even though Kagome realized that Sess wasn't in his right mind wheb he raped her, wouldn't a residule of her fear have come out during their lovemaking? Or did you deaql with this in an earlier chapter, and I just spaced too much? Anyway, when will we find out more about the "Master?" Inquiring minds want to know, so please update soon! oh, yeah, my email is [email protected] . Thanks for updating, and hope to see the newest chapter soon!

This story is really good. Well, I can even say it is one of my favourites.
I love your portrayal of Kagome and your own characters like Ozeki, Tatsu or Kisho.

I see it's been a while since you last updated this story and I really hope you did not give it up.
Please update soon *puppy eyes* ;)

It's been far too long since you've updated. It's making me suspicious that you've given up on finishing this story. Just please let your fans know why no updates! I've already forgotten a lot of the story and shall have to re-read it when and if you decide to update. Sorry if I sound frustrated because I am. It's a good story and you're a good writer.

A very nice story so far. I do have my guesses why Kagome is sick so often, though. It's no wonder if she got pregnant by Sesshoumaru, seeing as they apparently mated all night. And those who have noticed the scent change, blames it on her 'transformation'.

I have just finished re-reading the last gwo chapters of this story and was wondering if you were going to continue with it? I really like this story. Please let me know.

HELLOOOOOOO OUT THERE. Where are you? It's been too long. Please come back and finish this story. I check it almost daily for an update.

Your story is very welll written, I like the way you portrayed Kagome especially, i've never seen her as weak and whiney, so it made the story that much better for me. Please continue to update, I would love to see an ending.

PLEASE PLEASE don't do this to me. YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! its been a while since your last update. okay im birthdays coming up in a few weeks. soooo can u update before 8/12? I LOVE this story it rocks. it rules.. and it makes me sad when its not updated PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! PLEASE I BEG OF YOU!


Tori

o come onnnnnnnnnnnnn u love keepin us hangin dont u please UPDATE SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

love it love it..... sessh/kag together, yay.... please update soon..

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I loved this fanfic, read it on fanfiction. cant wait for u to update, which is finally

please update!!!!!!!!!!!

She's PREGGERS!!! Poor Sesshoumaru. I can't wait for his reaction mwahahahahahaha!!!!

This is an amazing story! I have'nt even finished reading it yet. But I'm so excited to see what happens next. Thanks alot!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow...that's all I have to say....seriously, I'd be willing to rate this fic up there with "Tales From the House of Moon" and that's saying something. Can't wait to see where it goes from here!

Spectacular, absolutely wonderful! The beginnings you've created here are incredible, and I look forward to seeing how things progress fronm here on out. I most especially look forward to the defeat of the 'master' and the furter progression of the relationships between Kagome and Sesshoumaru, and Kagome and her father.

Oooh, forget the "OOC" stuff ... these two chapters were DELICIOUS!! 'OOC' or not, I think you hit the nail on the head about Sessh coming right out and saying what he wanted to say. Once he got past his own internal barriers, of course!

I love the way this story has gone and am really looking forward to seeing some more intimate communication between Sessh and Kags. I'm kinda thinking there's another reason for that 'mysterious' illness of hers, right?

Thanks so much for more enjoyable reading material!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

The Southern army has arrived, Kagome and Sesshoumaru have reconciled, Kagome's powers are kicking in, and she must be pregnant. A lot happened in the two new chapters. Thanks for updating.

she is pregnant she is pregnant she is pregnant she is pregnant she is pregnant she is pregnant she is pregnant she is pregnant she is pregnant she is pregnant she is pregnant she is pregnant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats so cool. I was doubting but i am sure she is pregnant nice chapters I love them. I thought you were going to put a lemon but you made up for it.

Update!!!

I am sooo happy you updated! I like this fic and please email me agin when you update. I hope your editing wont take too long, because I can hardly stand the suspense! I hope they make up in the next chapter! Keep writing!

Well Happy Anniversary and please don't give up on this story! Kag is going to have to be the better person and try and see why he's acting the way his is. Because she's the female after all, and so can actually be the better in matters of sense. (unrepentant grin)

wow, thats so cool and funny at the same time. my sisters b-day is on the 27th of april as well.....i guess i have 2 things to celebrate. good luck with the editing and re-musing of your story and i can't wait to see what will happen next.

Why are you rewriting it??????? its perfect just the way it is.
Happy birthday SUNSET LOVE!!!!
IT IS ONE OF THE BEST FANFICS CONGRATS!!!!

Update as soon as possible.

Your chapters never cease to amaze me. This was so full of emotion. Take as long as you need to churn out another chapter, because it's worth the wait. Till then, I will be re-reading the entire story.

Mir

I fell in love with this story shortly after the first two or three chapters. I sincerely hope that you might regain your vision for the direction it should take ... it would be a shame, after all this work, to abandon such a magnificent story this far into it!!

I am especially interested in seeing whether or not you can reconcile the differences between what Kags and Sesshy are thinking about each other. I mean, one is convinced that he doesn't want her because she's hanyou, and the other is convinced that she wouldn't want him because he mated her without her consent. Then, of course, there's all the side issues still swirling around - curiosity abounds!!

At the very least, you can't let it go without telling us WHO the "Master" is! I will cross my fingers that you can manage the relatively minor editing that this story needs somewhat quickly ... and that you get the inspiration you need to continue it during the course of said editing. Obviously, there are many who still follow this and would be ever-so-pleased to have you regain your creative interest in it.

In the meantime, I'd like to thank you for many hours of wonderful, suspenseful, enjoyable reading! You have definite writing talent and I'm glad you shared even this much with all your readers!
:D
~~Wiccan~~
P.S. Heading off to Yahoo groups now to join ... ;)

I just found this fic while skimming through the nominees. Its really good! I hope you update soon, I really like this story. Please email me when you do update.

This was a great story... Rather is .. I can't wait to see how Sesshomaru acts when he sees (kagome) his mate... I hope that things go well for them considering what they have gone through already.....
Kagome was always the forgiving type so why not now....
I hope she is pregnant with his pup...
Well anyways glad you updated i was waiting for the next chapter...
Hope you update agian soon...
take Care
Mari
P. S... Add me to your list to nofity me when you update...

glad to see you updated. i'm still liking the fic and i'm looking forward to what happens between sesshoumaru and kagome. hopefully the next update will be soon!

wonderful as always... But I thought that Kag. did not know that kisho was her father at all. Must have missed that part.

ahhh... its been such a long time since u updated!!! i am so glad, though. Glad that kagome is finally back to the feudal era. i hope to find out wut is gunna happen when kagome and sesshomaru confront eachother!

(squeaks in alarm) AH! So close! Go help him! Go help each other! Please! Don't be long!

Welcome back! I root for Sess, Kag, and her father. I like the idea of inu youkai being seen as so powerful too. Even a relatively minor one.

Thank you for updating. I loved it.

gah! That's rather depressing. I hope she comes back. *sigh*

Poor Sesshy!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm bitting my nails just thinking of how will Kags react when she remembers complitely what happed **shudders...cryes...has an anxiety attack** LOL
Anyways; Kags went back to her time... this is a good chance for a mother-daughter talk about daddy dear ^_^
Can't wait to see what next chapter will bring ;D
Hope see you soon
Ja nE

i really like this story but why would you do that to her.wasn't bad enough that was put in the situation she was in.

this is like starting over there has been too much sadness it makes me cry.

sesshomaru and kagome have to have some happy moments. and pleas no falling in love with inuyasha
i will be waiting for another grate chapter from you i really just love this story i have read it more than once keep up the good work

Yay! A new chapter! I actually feel quite bad for Sesshomaru too, poor guy, he's completely guilt ridden and wants to comfort her but cannot. But I do like how you are building on this. And a cliffy?! So good yet not.

hmm... so kagome is finally "awake" that's good. i wonder when she'll regain her memories? ill be looking forward to the next chappy!

please write more and make the chapters longer

lu luv luv your story. spent most of my day reading it. it is better than the last two books I bought at a book store. your are terrific write. I really can't decide if I luved it best for the plot or the characterizations. Anyway will look forward to seeing any future updates

OMG OMG ALSOME MANN or umm LADY...??? Heheh I LUVED THIS CHAPPIE THANKIES SOO MUCH UR FAITHFUL READER... NOW...whens your next chapter coming out.. oj yes you said something about stress, but we all not just me but hundreds of others love your story and thinging about all the people who read your stories or story should be ur inseperation.


Tori

yay update... boo hoo for sessh... will kag wake from her nightmares... very sad... until next time...

YES! Thanks for the update and I wish the best for all of them (though I wish 'Yasha would back off. His place truly is elsewhere). Thanks again for coming back. Hope your stess level continues to drop.

I eagerly await more chappies from you-this story is more than intriguing!

-Dani.

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Iloved the chapter man you get better and better and better every time you write a new one. I hope you update as soon as possible. bye

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ME WANT UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The wall separating them is getting higher and higher! But like always. an awesomely written chapter. Poor Kagome and Sesshomaru, I do hope there will be some nice fluff in the near future.
And very good job on your characterizations of the existing characters from the anime and new characters that you have made up. You have given depth to them.
Can't wait for your next update!

I'm glad you updated. I hope things are better now and I'm glad to hear that you will be finishing this story 'cause I really love it. I've seen many great stories that were never finished. It's a shame to see great work without their finale.

wow, awesome fic! i loved it! please update soon! =D

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Thank you,
Victoria...
aka Tori

update update please pretty please

EEEK!! Come back, come back! You have to continue this and CRUSH that slime!

Ah! Please tell me you'll update soon! I can feel doom (or Sess angst) closing in!

InuYasha's 'get it done now!' attitude actually came in handy. Wow.

I hate manipulative figures. It makes me want to thwart them somehow. Enigmatic mysterious figures should be handled with a paintball gun.... or a sewer line.

I hope she's a long lost sister to Kisho so he's not competiition for Sesshoumaru. You have no idea how refreshing it is to have her mature and quietly (almost) intelligent.

I hope it released the spells on him as well.

Yes! She's trained, mature, and smart enough not to just rush in. I am both impressed and grateful for this fic. I've been kind of crabby in reviewing lately.

My heart is broken for both Sesshoumaru and Kagome!! Please come back soon and update!! I just hope they can recover from this!! Thanks for the excellent story!!

I knew it~! But wait... I fogot who Lady Kana is. She said Kagome was her 'child'... So her grandmother? *confused* I have to go back and read that chapter.

Well, in any case, I realy liked this chapter. Congrats on not kiling the main character. ^^ Kagome has to pull through this. No story is she doesn't. The question is, how scared (both mentally and physically) will she be in the end? And will she ever go back (before the final chapter) to talk to her mother about Kisho? ...Hmm...

I just hope there's more confrontation (from Inuyasha and Kischo?) and you get through a couple of the much needed conversations soon. *pokes lightly* Maybe they're coming up in the next few chapters?

OH. MY. GOD. You're going to kill me with an anguished heart attack, I just know it. *cries* When I first started reading this fic, I thought I was reading a "complete" fic, rather than an incomplete one. I am now desperately awaiting the next chapter, and if you don't add me to an update list of some sort, I'm going to check back every single day to make sure there hasn't been a newly added chapter. I've only read one other fanfiction that held such superb storytelling, characterization, and descriptions before. You are truly a fantastic author. The only thing I could fault you on would be the way that some words seem to get skipped over while you're writing (I have this same problem- lol)..such as saying "Sesshoumaru inclined his head, his elegant neck tilted forward in a slight bow", only leaving out the word 'neck'. I forgot where I found something like that, but oh well.

I would happily be your beta reader, if you are still searching for one. I'm great at catching grammar/spelling mistakes (no arrogance intended, it's just simply that many writers I have known have sought me out to correct their grammar and speech). Not to mention the fact that I adore your writing, and would practically chop my arm off to be able to check out the next installment of your story before you intend to post it!!! Ahhh, such an amazing story...

I fully intend to devour each and every one of your other fanfictions with my eyes the moment I am done posting this review and rating your fic. You have held me captivated by this story- I've been late to work and school every single day because I could simply not take my eyes off of this story! XD Whoops.

Hi Hi!!!!!
Oh My Gods!!!!!!!! O.O
I just finished reading this story after two long days... and I-absolutely-LOVE-it!!!!!!!!!!! xD
The characters, the story-line, the amazing way you have of writing every part of the story, that leaves you in the edge of an anxious atack ;D
I must stand from my sit and give you a prize (or better said worship you =D) for your amazing work.
This is getting really interesting, and poor Sess... Guilt is really eating him o.O
But knowing Kagome she'll make him feel better with himself ^_^
BTW, is Kags a hanyou????? o.O
You know, after all the Kisho-father, Miko-mother thing?? O.O
I can't wait to see her real form ^_^
Or she'll remain that way?? o.O
Anyways, I'm sure I'l simply love anything you come up with ^_^
I can't wait to see another chapter of this amazing master piece ;D
Hope see you soon
Be$h!7º$H..! 2 U(^.^)
Byes

That was awsome!!! That word doesn't even describe how much I like your story. I beg you to update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yay... new update.... yay... this is an awesome fic

I absolutely love your story. I decided to read it because it was on the updated list and sounded really interesting. As soon as I got to the second chapter I didn’t want to check and see how many chapters there were because I was afraid it would end! I was thinking ‘I’ll read and review each chapter’ but I just got so wrapped up in the story, I completely forgot! I can’t wait for your next update. I’ll honestly be checking everyday! And I do mean everyday! The overly eager,
~Chaos

This chapter was amazingly written. Sesshomaru's characterization was beautiful and I cannot wait for the next chapter.

Mir

thanks for updating! i am looking forward for your next installment...i really love this fic!

Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating. I hope we get to see the next chapter soon. Please!

Irritatiing, your cliffies are definatly irritating. So PEASE, PLEASE update soon

YAY!!! I love this chapter!!!! GREAT job!!! Udate soon!

great chapter! I had suspicions about Kisho and Kagome, but i didn't know if they were true until now! =D thanks! and keep up the great work!

dude its great chap plz continue asap plzzzzzzzzz

Oh dear lord, Sesshoumaru, it's gonna be okay. Kagome needs to pull through, and who was the ebony haired lady in the chpater before this one?
Kaaaagggoooommeee T_T self sacrficing little miko.
Teehee loving it, wonderful writing! Cannot wait for more!

you know i love your story very much so I won't be praising it so much. THANKS FOR THE LONG CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope you update as soon as possible. and do well in school. read yours later!!! ^__^

*cracks knuckles* You can't have possibly stopped there...my eyes are seeing things wrong.

*facepalm and then whine* How could you stop there? This is the worst type of cliffhanger I've ever seen...so bad it's addictively good. It makes me want to bite my nails and wait right here for the next chapter.

*adds you to favs* Update now!

Just like to say that I enjoy your story so far. Hate to see that Sess rapes Kagome, it will cause a lot of anguish between them and their friends. Your last chapter kind of reminds me of one of the old Star Trek series. The one were Spock was going through the Pon Far. Were every 7 years the Vulcans must take a wife and mate or they go insane from the maddness of their emotions that they suppress all the time. Anyway, great story and hope to see a update soon.

Omg... That's... OMG! In the last chapter when Kisho was talking to himself I was wondering if the shield had a sound barrier to it. To have to sit there and... *shudders* Thank you for supplying my imagination with these wonderful images. >_>

By the way, stupid Kagome! >_ Who the hell gets that close to raging demon?! *whacks her*

What a complex lie. Sora told everyone that she was Kage's lover, but she had already killed and taken his form by the time that had spread. Then she told everyone, as Kage, that the two were bound to one another? O_o Wow... And now this new guy, Hayashi, is in charge. Or rather, he will be when the spell wears off, the generals finish fighting and he thinks of a plan. Nice.

OH! *waves hand in the air* I know who took Iyashii and his kid! It was 'Lady Kana'. And the kid was his daughter. *nods* I thought so before when the master had said that his concubine was really strong and a sorceress (since Sora was dead only one other person would have use for them).

Well, aside from the obvious depressing sections of this installment and the need for proofing... Pretty good chapter. I really don't like you right now because you didn't put a sound barrier on the cave and you cut the chapter off, but if you update sometime in the next few months I just MAY forgive you. *nods*

Please update soon? I'll give you cookies.

Oh! 2 Q's: 1) Is the cave that Hayashi ducked into part of the cave S+K are in? Please say no.

2) Is Lady Kana really Kagome's mother? I didn't get that part of the story. Read it twice too. You just said that Kagome's mother 'verified' what Kana had told Kagome about being there when she was born. 'Beside her mother's bed' - whatever that means.

Just wondering. It's been bothering me for a while. BYE!

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl

Juhu finally you updated ^^ I´m so happy for this new Chapter ( it brought Tears to my eyes ) I Hope you update soon ^^

Ive been waiting for this chapter since forever and im hoping you have the next chapter out soon.

Ah! How acan you leave it like that. You're such a tease. Anyway, I read all your chapters in one go and I must say I'm quite amazed by your creativity and originality. So, with that said I do hope you add another chapter soon. Ja.

I love this fanfic. I started reading it on the fanfiction site. It's written beautifully, please update date soon.

I have seen this on mm.org and have been hoping it would be updated. I believe there may be another chappie or two more on mm.org (or maybee I saw it on ff.net, or another site). All I can say is I have been eagerly wanting to see more chappies! this story is great, keep up the good work and update soonest! Oh, and if you could possibly put me on a list to notify when there are updates, I'd really appreciate it

I just started reading this today, and i already finished it, I enjoyed it sooo much and i can't wait till you update again!!!

I just started reading this today, and i already finished it, I enjoyed it sooo much and i can't wait till you update again!!!

You are an excellent writer! I am still on chapter two but just wanted to let you know that.

I love the story. Please continue and hope you update soon. I want
Sora out of the picture.

Jo ^^ I´m happy that you finally update ^^ I hope you keep up your good work and update soon ^^

OMFG you HAVE TO update!

I love your story sooo muuuuch I think im going to die if you dont update soon please and thank you!

Can you please let me know when you update this story? I'm not sure if you can see the e-mail address so I'll put it down again just in case.
[email protected]

Update!!!!!!
Please!!!
Please!!!

Oh wow. I absoutly adore your writing. You've woven many different characters, and you seem to be able to keep track of them all. I've been reading the story now for the past few hours, and I can't wait until the next chapter is posted up.

I'd like to be on the update list for this story, and I believe my e-mail is already given.

Keep up the amazing work.

Always -
Crescent.

I know that chapter 20 was up BEFORE the site crashed. SO, what happened to those chapters. I am waiting for chapter 21 so when you get a chance update please.
Thanks.


P.S. I really love this story!

I really hope you are intending to write more chapters for this story for it is really good and I am on the edge of my seat with anticipation. Please, please post a new chapter soon!!