awesome story, with a great plot and new characters for the mix... please write more and do updates on dokuga!!!!

please more i want to know what happeneds!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MORE!! that was so k ass i want to know what happeneds i hae followed this story since you posted it please i would really like to fin out what happeneds!!!!

iloveit! please try updating soon :D3

i luv ur story!!!!!!!tha suspence iz killin me u hav 2 write another chap!!!!i hav 2 b truful though u lost the last 2 chaps....u might wanna work on the scene changing...other than that ur story rules and i cant wait till the next chap so hurry up!!!!!!
ps:peac+luv+respect=happiness

WOW! Amazing CHPT! Pwease keep this up!

I liked it alot!!! I can't wait for the next update!!! I'll read always!!

~Bethany

thank you for updating plz have the next chapter done soon its getting good

please another chapter i want to know what happends this is such great stuff!!!!!!!

hello I was wondering if you were going to finish this story. I thought it was really good and have been waiting to see what happens next.

I was wondering if you were going to update this story soon. I hope you do. Plus I have a question, The other woman you said she was in heat. So is she with pup and is it sesshomaru's?

I wanted so long for this chapter. I hope you continue and soon.

whats the deal with kagura and kanna and i hope that kagome wont take back sesshoumaru that easily anyway update soon! *.*

Make kagome have a baby so Sesshomaru can feel like an ass for what he did.

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Well I really like your story. For a while I was worried that Sesshoumaru was going to just leave Kagome. Out of every thing I have read your story is well orginized and has a great plot to it. I think you made some really good charges to it as well. I love how you have orginized it into chapters that are eassy to fallow. I am excited to read what you have next. Well I hope you hade a good Graduation ^-^ !!!

the man-whore needs a good kick in the pants....or maybe balls.....hmmmmmm

Kag should go to an infertility place to see why exactly she couldn't get pregnant......it could be all sess's fault.......or since Kag is so small she could be preg and just did not realise it yet.

What happened to Rin and Shippo??
don't you think the slut might try to kill Rin??

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
I really hope sess can't get through the well.....I hope he'll have to wait 500+ years for her....
I also hope Kag is pregnant with a lil girl.....I wonder if sess does get to the future if Kag had a preme
I really like the tree.....
you'd think sess would try to get the names of the servants that dared to disobery him and disrespect him so that he could kill them.

more, I want more....

I would just love to see how our western lord will accomplish this! We know Kagome can be difficult. I hope he don't hurt the little guy to badly. I would like to see you update soon please! Peace!

This story keeps getting better and better. I can't wait till the next chapter is posted.

MORE ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEASE I WANT TO SEE IF THE GREAT SESSHOMARU GETS HIS WOMAN BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Plz update more soon!!

Nicely done everything was interesting. Just kinda get lost with all the characters sometimes lol. Please update again soon

Chelsea

I love this story but i wish you would update sooner. However i do ubderstand people being busy so. Anyway keep up the good work and update soon.
Sakura

great story so far! i know concubines where considered ok in that age but i have no idea how a wife..er...mate could handle sharing her bed with another female!!! it is disrespectful towards the wife or mate in this case. what a jerk!!! i hope she does not go easy on him!! he did cheat after all, and cheated in the worst way! i hope she rips him a new a@@hole!!!

Love it. Very nicely done Niongi-san, I especially love the rubber ducky that you put in the fic it was cute.

love this fic so far!! ^^ hope that jin gets there on time and that sess will not punish him...oh, and let kagome be pregnant with sess's baby...let him realize what a grave mistake he has done getting a concubine for an heir where he can have kagome to do it...of course that'll be a miracle though...haha! ^^ keep it up!

liked the story so far. hope that jin will get to sess in time and that sess would not punish jin, that's just not fair! you, know, for he's the one who safeguarded kagome and all...also, hope that there'll be miracle where kagome becomes pregnant with sess's baby....something like that...okay, ehough with this daydream (though i really hope that this'll happen, similarly...), anyways, you're doing great so keep it up! ^^

I love how your creativity blossoms with each chapter. I can only wonder what will happen next especially after Jin finds Sesshoumaru. Keep up the great work.

hiya its me again and im finished reading the whole thing this time. thanks for getting that bitch away from sesshy aa i was so happy i kept thinking OMG! that whore lol and was like wow she is one lol and i love jin just to let u know i was thinking like him too like aaa im gonna kill that dude and fyi ho-bo(hojo) i gaw he gets on my nerves haha wow this is long and i was wondering y jin got through and not sesshy and y he is just now going bak owell and thats all my little mind can come up with to say cant wait for your next update ill be counting the moments lol jk

i just finished chappie 5 andthe fact that sessho had another girl sickend me aaa it was soo wrong but i couldnt turn away lol atleast he left at the end but to god noes where but i could see how that could happen in the warring era cause it most likely happened but still it is good so far even though Yaki is a HOME RECKER lol if you could could u add me on for your update list?? and is this long enough for ya? ta~ta gonna keep reading [email protected]

btw...how do we know Kags infertile??
I mean if the bitch doesn't get preg there's only one common factor...
...could you please do us all a favor and castrate Sesshomaru the cheater!!!

Hey if Kag sees him in the future she should copy what Carrie did in her song Before He Cheats.....

why didn't Sess let her go to a fertility clinic or something in the future??
Kag should know those exist......
.......maybe she hasn't started to ovulate yet.....
.....there ARE late bloomers like that........but if she started about the time when they last did it {before the sob brought home the bitch} Kag could be mega pregnant....and demons might first develop in quality{precision}and then quantity{size} and then Kag could swell up like a balloon!

PLEASE LET KAG BE PREGNANT AND HAVE THE BITCH TORCHERED!!!!{I'll give you the matches} AND MAKE SESSHOMARU SEE WHAT AN IDIOT HE AND HIS PRIMITIVE HALF ARE AND MAKE HIM BEG! MAKKE HIM REALLY REALLY REALLLY BBBBBBBEEEEEEEEGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sry...im not good at summaries either...and im just a lil confused with this fic! but anyways i still like it and i still wanna read more so i do home u update soon ^^!

It's been a couple of days since you've written your last chapter and I'm left to do nothing SO HERES my own suggestion about your problem, um... yeah..What the fuck is wrong with the summary anyway? the summary you have before is way better than you post in your A/N. A mystery is hidden in the summary you have before. People are somehow get intrested with this fic because of the QUESTION:Normally, sessh is a lord and really need a heir and yet he mated with kagome who can't produce one for him, And thats when readers got surprised of sessh getti'n a concubine. Now cheer up and write the next chapter already!!!!!!!!!!!!!

With the Shikon no Tama returned on a selfish wish, Kagome is left heartbroken and unable to bear her mate, Sesshoumaru's children. What happens when the demon lord get a concubine?

I read the first chapter and its really goo so far :) i'll keep reading and tell you what i think!..keep it up!

Summary :

After Kagome finds out that Sesshoumaru got a concubine she escapes to her time and tries to forget him. Meanwhile in the western castle sesshoumaru gets more problems when he finds that the concubine is having affairs with his servants.

you can edit it a little bit if I'm missing something.

UPDATE SOON.!!!!!

I just started reading your fic and I have to say I like it! I'm putting my summary here and sending it to you cuz it doesn't always work...
Until Death- Kagome's sick and she refused to tell anyone. Leaving her family clueless in the future, she turns to the past, and Inuyasha, but it seems he's already made a choice, and, sadly, it's not her. Alone and near death, Sesshoumaru finds her in the forest...

Okay there are some things I think you should read on your last chapter. Don't get me wrong I love the story but I think some of the lines need to be changed before adding another chapter unless you done it that way on purpose...
On your last chapter Kagome had been home for four months, going to high school being in the junior year (I believe or was it Sophmore?) Anyways, how could Kagome be mated to Sesshoumaru for four years when she fell in the well at age 15 and is only 17 in the last chapter????? There are a few other little things I noticed but I will let you tend to those when you can see fit.... Anyways, I hope you update soon dispite what I've said... Until later....

I've been watching for this story for months! Its sad that kagome can't have children because of the jewel... of course I can hope theres some sort of plot twist involving her getting pregnant or something ^^. If not I'm sure you've got something much better in store.

As for a summary I'll take a shot at it:

The jewel has been completed and has returned to Kagome's body. Inuyasha and Kikyou have settled down, and Kagome has found love in Sesshomaru. But Kagome's happily ever after turns out not quite as happy as she had thought. Who is this woman Sesshomaru has brought home, and what price does he have to pay for an heir?

Hmmm, to have an angsty summary:

The battle was over. Kagome and Sesshoumaru finally mated, but there was a problem, Kagome was unable to bear children. Will Sesshoumaru turn to another to help him reproduce?

WOW! I like this version even better than the original. This most recent chapter was excellent!

I love this fic... Kill Yaki!!! The bitch!

As for the summary:

Kagome and Sesshomaru have been happily mated for Four years, but who said happy was going to last. Complications arise with the Shikon Jewel gone that throw their mating into a spiral that is out of control.

How does that sound? It’s short and sweet, directly to the point without giving away the curve balls that will be thrown at them in the future.

Maybe that’s not your style, how about this then:

Four years of happily being mated and it’s all shot to hell. When a new woman is introduced into the picture can true love continue from where it was halted with dream shattering news?

Okay this one has a little bit more meat to it. This summary tells of the woman but not her intentions or the fact that she is there to produce an heir. I still like the first one! Oh well still your choice. If I have any more ideas I’ll send them.

Oo.. Update soon!!!!

I'm an author here so feel free to read my stories. Yes I am telling you!!! Go read them!!! and continue writing!!!

This site wouldn't let me log in..
*tears*

oh well...

Ja-ne

Here how about this:

Sesshoumaru and Kagome have finally settled down but because of the a selfish wish the jewel is tainted and returned to Kagome’s body making her unable to bear children. Will they be torn apart by a plotting female or will Sesshoumaru realize his mistake and fix his relationship with kagome before it is too late?

It's a bit long but maybe it can at least help you.

defective, unworthy, were the words that rang through Kagome's head. Feeling replaced by Sesshoumaru's new concubine, Kagome flees the one she loves, back to her future home. But will sesshoumaru go after her, or will he name Yaki the new Lady of The Western Lands..? Kinda long I know, but there is n idea.

i love it please make more i love this fan fic i am severly hooked on it

Here's my summary:
[Kagome and Sesshomaru are beginning their lives as mates.....but what's this?? A CONCUBINE!!!!
WHAT ON EARTH IS SESSHOMARU THINKING!?!?!?
When Kagome gets fed up and leaves is there any chance of them getting their happily ever after all??]

And if it wins you could just post the two chaps faster......
PLEASE LET KAGOME BE PREGNANT!!!!!!!!! AND MAKE HER MAKE SESSHOMARU BEG BEG BBBEEEGGG!!!!!!!!
and make her make it hard for sess to get her back
(and I'm trying to figure out how fast the reviews are shown by the site....I mean some do it rigth away and other it feels like it takes a loong time....so for my memory it's 12:20pm EST on 3-13-07)

I can not give opinions on summaries but I can review. *smiles*

The idea is very interesting but I think that I agree with another author. Sesshoumaru acted a bit too interested in the concubine seeing as how she was only a vessel and nothing more. I also understand that the Inu demons have very strong instincts and for that I suppose it is possible - especially if she was in heat.

What I can not understand is: why make Kagome so affectionate to Hojo? I hope he didn't kiss her yet because she's still supposed to love Sesshoumaru - if it's real love it's not going to pass so soon. Sesshoumaru cheated on her so he has no rights to demand anything, be it her love or her fidelity, but I just think it's a little off to have her seemingly pass over her mating so easily. The mark should not let allow it either - it should react to the touch of another male or the process in itself is useless. You might want to add that bit.

Now, for the last point - don't let her forgive him so easily! *fuming* If he could ignore her so and not even notice that she was unhappy with her life and her position in his house, then he deserves to grovel at her feet and beg for forgiveness (of course, while keeping him in character. No tears or whimpering or anything like that. Just dignified begging *giggles*) I hope she doesn't aceept him so fast either - actually he deserves the cold shoulder and her refusal.

*scratches head* I'm not even sure how he's going to come through the well. *ponders* The mark might be a way, since they are connected and anything connected with the Shikon Jewel is allowed free passage. Another way would've been for him to be stuck in the Feudal Era with no way of going to her era but that was ruled out when Jin was able to pass. If he, a not so powerful demon could pass, then Sesshoumaru surely can.

*grins* In a very short version of this review - update soon kay?

Wait the light demonic aura couldn't be a pup in Kags could it??
I REALLY HOPE SO!!!!!!!
I'll even give you a mall-load of cyber-chocolate or the cyber-candy of your choosing if you'll let Kag have her own baby/pup/w/e..

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

When I began reading this story I thought that it was very cruel that Kagome was not able to have babies and that Sess turned to another woman. But I think that what makes the story very interesting. It gives it a different twist. I like the inclusion of these vessels that are tied to the family especially Jin. He is a very interesting character. I look forward to reading how everything will work out. I hoping for a small miracle for Kagome that she will one day be able to have children. I know this is just a story but rejection sucks! Unitl your next chapters I look forward to reading more of your story.

AWesome awesome awesome. I have an explosive temper. I can't imagine what I would have done if that were to happen to me. Write more.

Update soon. You have ti explaine the situation to me a bit more cause I don't know what the situation is between jiro and kagome. And waht is sesshoumaru doing to get kagome back??? I'm a little lost here.

Hi there! I just finished reading your story, all of it. I like it very much but there are some things I didn't understand. I will stick to the point so, please, don't get me wrong, this is no flame.

I understand Kagome can't have children because of the tainted shikon inside of her, I'm not sure if they are aware of that or not or why they never tried to find out her infertility. I can understand Sesshomaru needs a heir and so the concubine is needed, but why did he never tell her knowing she was from a different time and why was he so loving with the concubine, especially if she is in heat. Wouldn't he have a sexual need and nothing more, it seemed to me that he acted more as a loving lover than as an interested man of state. Now that she is in her time, why hasn't anybody showed up? Are they all dead?

And just to finish, I aplaude to the decision of Kagome of being cold and distant, she is right to be hurt as a woman, her feelings have been underestimated and she has been stepped over, Sesshomaru never noticed how his servants treated her? Did he never thought he was degrading Kagome in front of the servants by taking a concubine and everybody being able to hear them rutting? I really hope it takes her really long to forgive him because I would take it as cheating in front of my noses, and what makes it wrong is that he never thought he was doing anythign wrong, I'm not sure he realises how bad he has treated her.

I hope I wasn't too harsh, but if I was, I apologise, it wasn't my intention

awesom I love this fic...mainly cause Kagome is sticking up for herself..But what does sesshoumaru think. He seems slightly confused.

Wow!!! Glad you update and added a few more chapters...
I like this story.. I was rather pissed when Sesshomaru brought home that WHORE!!! But Iam glad he came to his sense's and is getting rid of her...
What happens now with them..
I hope the little guy gets to Sesshomaru in time and nothing happens to Kagome....
I think it would be interesting to have Sesshomaru come to her time and try to kiss and make up...
Now that the jewel is glowing can she get pregnant and have his heir.. That would be nice.. Maybe they can make up in her time and thats how she could get pregnant and have his heir.. The jewel doesn't affect her in her time... Just a thought...
Well anyways i really do enjoy reading this and i am gald your back and can't wait to read more .. This story is in my favorites list and i can't wait for each chapter update...
Take Care
Mari

Hey! Not bad! I like this story! And I'm super glad that you updated! I like the way you depict everything.

Great job.

Excellent spelling and grammar as well.

I just have two suggestions. (You don't have to listen to them; that's why they are called suggestions)

(1) If you find that a paragraph is going on for too long, perhaps you could try and break it up a bit. On some parts, mostly where Kagome is thinking, I found myself reading a couple of lline 3 times because I couldn't connect the sentences together.

and

(2) Try and avoid using '...' too much. On occasion that is ok, to show hesitation or something, but if it occurs too often it becomes a turn off when reading a story.

and

(3) Italics can be difficult to read. Perhaps, instead of making thoughts direct from the character to the reader, you could simply incorporate thoughts into the story itself. I don't quite know how to explain this. Umm. Here; I'll try and give a make-shift example.

Example
Kagome sat by the fire; her legs folded up and her arms surrounding her legs. She couldn't help but let her thoughts run back to the mate she abonded at the palace.

He doesn't need me. Kagome thought sourly. He has that other woman. Yaki.

Kagome sighed miserably. What was wrong with her? Was there some kind of curse, set by Kami, that restricted her to be loved? Had anyoe ever loved her? Was she destined to be alone for the rest of her days? Kagome didn't know, but damn did she ever want to.


You know? Something like that?

Any way, those are just a few suggestions. Keep up the great work and I love the updates. Please updated again soon.

-Ashley

WOW! I knew that you were revising this and it was great before but now its fantastic!!!! I really cant wait for the next chapter!!! Please update soon!!! Great stoy!!!!

oh my gosh....I just realized this was the first Sess/Kag story you also posted on fanfic that made me a Sess/Kag fan several months ago! I dont know why, but I feel the need to thank you, since that was how I came onto this site and other fanfictions by random on google!

Anyways, i loved the last chapter! It was filled w/emotions and the plot of running away! Please hurry and write the next chap!

Is Yaki pregnant?
Is Jin going to help Kagome run away?
WILL Kagome run away?
What happens if she DOES run away?

Please, the suspense is killing me!

This is a very dramatic fic. The changes are working well. The dreams under the herbs. I am confused though. If he marked her as a wife( although its said she is a concubine). And he won't let her leave till she bears a son. How is she his in this life and after death in the next life? What is the difference between mate and wife then? Although some of the changes made more sense in reference to character, in the last chapter he has to add "if I wish " instead of saying he wouldn't bed her after pregnancy for Kagome in his conversation with her( even if after he bedded Yaki he felt bad and knew it wasn't her he wanted in his arms). Its still a slap in the face. Between Yaki's thoughts and his nightmare, boy is he in for it( which I can't say he doesn't deserve some of it.since he created the mess in the first place. even if something else seems to be going on as well). I'm wondering what Rin's reaction will be, and his thoughts in the next chapter are. Maybe he will hear the guards talking about Kagome and the situation and hear what his mate had to deal with. I am hoping that the mark on Yaki is not a permanent one, and if killed she is not bond to him for eternity. Also wonder if we will hear Jaken's thoughts on it as well. When will Sesshomaru notice Kagome is missing...Who knows what is really going on? Will it be Kagome having to save Sesshomaru from whatever is going on? Also I wonder what is going on with the Shikon, since the wish was not a pure one is it tainted in her body and that maybe the reason she cannot conceive? 4 years it seems like a bit long to be purified but it would be cool if when she gets back to her time she is pregnant. But you are a great author and I leave it up to you to amaze us with your talents and ideas and look forward to reading it Update soon please .

wow
this story is soo different (I LOVE DIFFERENT)
from the begining, i was sucked in
I LOVE ITT!!
updatee plleaseeee
i cant wait to see how this turns outt

Oh Snap! This is tugging at my heart already! I'v read all six chapt and let me tell you, I can't wait for the next installment. You've made my heart strings stretch with pain. I love it though. Please update soon!

Wow. This chapter made me cry... how could Sesshou do that to kagome! How cruel! I hate him!!! well..i don't, but...oh god.... alright. Please update soon, it's a great story. Good Luck! ^__^

Please update!!!! I've been waitng forever to find out what is going to happen next!!! This is a really good story, just please dont leave me sitting here in the dust wondering what was going to happen next!!! ~Taiyoukai's Lady

I wanted to let you know you are a very talented writer, I love how you keep so close to how the real sesshomaru would act. So thank you for sharing your wonderful story with me

I have been hearing of your story and I didn't think or want to read it at first but it really is great. Thank you so much for having Kagome stick up for herself. I know if my mate did that to me regardless I would leave. bleah great story update soon

I really am loving your story. It is amazing and extremely touching. I really hope that you can start updating faster. This story makes me so mad at sesshomaru and somewhat proud of Kagome unlike most of the stories where Kagome stays with him, she leaves. I can't wait to see the next update. I would love it if you could email me at the next update. Thanks! Keep going!

This is and awesome story, but i think the next chapter could have kagome leave and seal the well and sess not realize she's gone until a couple days later. Right now he deserves a little heartbreak and even though for the youkai society the females are supposed to be submissive, i think kags should headstrong. Also, if she gets separated from sess it's way too cliche to have her to be sobbing and stuff like that. Personally I think there should be more romance and less lust cuz then i kind makes me wonder WHY the love each other and why the mated. I'ts wonderful that she's not okay with the concubine or else that would be very stupid. It might make it cool if you had her leave and really short note that had many hidden meaning to it like thi sun rises as the moon hides,never at the some moment. that would mean they are the sun and moon and it he has that girl, they can't be together. i also think that if you have a part later in the story where sess finally sees kag when she's visting the gang and sings a song to their kids that really hits a chord in him like last christmad by ashley tisdale, the words to this song are really awesome

~phizzybubbles

OMG!! REALLY LOVE UR STORY!! BUT I HATE SESSHOU RITE NOW GOW DARE HE!!!!! AND THAT BITCH CANT ROT FOR ALL I CARE. N THIS NEW CHARACTER WHAT IS HIS ROLE WELL HE BE PLAYING KAGOME SAVIOR!! OHHH I HOPE WHAT BEST WAY TO GET BACK AT SESSHOU THEN WITH THE ONE HE BELIEVES TO BE A CLOSE FRIEND. =^-^= WELL HOPE UPDATE NOW I REALLY DIDNT SEE THE POINT OF EDITING IT WAS GREAT AS IT WAS BUT ITS OK HOPE NEXT TIME IT AN UPDATE THOUGH BEST OF LUCK!!

Ooh, I hate how Kagome's suffering right now.. >_

Please update, I do believe that a lot of us would be very interested in a new chapter!! (Though, btw, chapter one seems to have been replaced mistakenly by chapter five.)

HELLO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Why do you kept editing it??? Seems fine to me. You should UPDATE!!!!! I'm soooooo excited!!! KILL the Yaki BITCH!!! I WANT HER DEAD!!!!!!! Poor Kags!!! but Sesshou is only doing this for the pup right??? He better!!!! What's Inu gonna do to him??? This is 1 fight i want Inu to win!!!!

Sesshoumauru: Hn. This Sesshoumaru will never betray his mate. And the half-breed shall never win against me.

T.M: **mumble** Whatever, Lord-of-the-Fluff.

Sesshoumaru: What did you say, ningen?

T.M: Uh-oh... =(

**Sesshoumaru is about to use Poison Claws on Tuyet Menh**

T.M: KAGOME!!!!!

Kagome : Sesshoumaru!!! BAD DOG!!!

I think this is a great start. please continue. I like that your exploring the differences in their time. Unfortunately i don't have any sympathy for sess.

I hope she makes it to the well(i doubt she will) or atleast it shouldn;t simply forgive. How do you maintain a relationship with your husbands mistress under your roof. she could never forgive and forget. She needs to run far far away

she seemed hesitant to condemn him but he deserves it. Sess needs to suffer a little.

I have enjoyed reading your fic! However, it is heart breaking and I don't like Sesshoumaru right now and he deserves not to see Kagome for 500 yrs and This youkai woman deserves nothing! Well, this has been an emotional fic and I totally feel Kagome needs to pay him back. You know would it not be funny if Kagome went home and the doctors in her time was able to repair her so she could have children and then, she refuses Sesshoumaru by getting a youkai divorce through their society and Sesshoumaru has to earn her love all over again! ok, I know just a thought, and without a doubt I know your ideas are much better!I I just want to see Sesshoumaru hurt!hope you update soon!
A Loyal Reader,
REDWOLF

i really loved this story of yours!! i dont know whether this will suit your plot or not but i think it would be interesting if somehow, Kagome could be pregnant (maybe from her wish through the shikon) and she will reject sess and have one other potential mate since i hate sess right now for taking a second mate :) and in the end sess really show her that he is sorry and they will reunite. hope my idea helps somehow

THis is so cool! I like this fic! it really had touched me...the way kagome feels, and when she ran away from the castle because she couldn't carry the burden anymore...oww...I really wish you could update sooner 'cuz i want to know what'll the reaction of sesshoumaru be and will he be outrageous, will he search for her immediately...oh i just can't wait. hehe ^^ Keep it up! you're doing great! ^^

AAAAAAAAAAH! When will you update. The torture! The TORTURE!!

Also, I totally am still mad at Sesshoumaru.

She should leave his stupid ass. That'd learn him.

Seriously. Leave Sesshoumaru and settle down with Jin. They'd live happily ever after with...like a ton of hanyou kids and Sesshoumaru's demon wife would be barren. And he'd be left alone for years and years and when he finally finds Kagome...she's happy with a family. And he's alone....and in the rain. Yes. Sesshoumaru soggy and unhappy...That's the best ending to the story.

AGH! It is your story though. So I should just shut up and let it unfold. Good work though...I'm still all worked up about this.

OMG!!! GREAT FF!!! @first i was kinda mad cuz y r u making Sesshou even like this demon's secent? But the story and plot line is great!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!! ( i think a little inu sesshou fight over looking out for kags would be great! just a little suggestion ^_^ )

omigod! that was sooo sad! i honestly can't believe that happened! i mean you think a guy would at least warn a girl before he takes a concubibe! jeez.... lol but yeah awesome story, great plot line! a hope you update again soon!

I don't know why but this story pissed me off...well alright I do know why...kagome shouldn't be treated that way she should have told sesshoumaru that he could get the bitch pregnant and then have her killed and have kagome raise the baby as her own...I would have never taken that shit from him...damn give kagome some fucking back bone she's a powerfull miko she could purifie that whore to hell!!
I think she should cheat on sesshoumaru and get prenant with some other powerfull demons baby..Even if she and sessh can't have kids together dosen't mean she can't have kids at all...I mean it happens all the time doctors will tell wemon that can't have babies but months later it's a miracle she's pregnant...Sorry you just go me really in to this story...I really want sesshoumaru to pay for bringing another woman in to there home like that and then leaving kagome feeling like a fool! There should be only one lady. The demon girl has to die...she has too it's the only way I'll be happy... : ) Come on just do it...kill her off...OR! You could have kagome be like fuck this and get back to her time and stay there meet a guy that almost looks just like sessh and have her fall for him because he's a good guy and loves her and have her some how pull him in to the well on accident and they can't get back...okay maybe not that but make HIM PAY!! He needs too lose the one he loves some how to hurt him bad.

See this is all your fult you had to get me all worked up!

: )

Great stoy it just need some pay back in it.

AUGH! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! I'M ON PINS AND NEEDLES!!

I give stabbity to Sesshoumaru in this story. Jerk. ( I know, the authoress has her reasons for doing it...it's a good sign I'm that involved if I get mad!)

Good work! Looking forward to seeing more from this!

i don't know if i reviewed for this chapter yet, but whatever!
please please please update soon!!
i don't usually go for drama/angst but this story is too good to pass up! please update as soon as you can!

Ja Ne!

...From The Desk Of Sesshoumaru's Fiend...

-[Ashley]

please oh please oh please oh please,Let kagome leave seshy It's wrong I know but HOW COULD HE ACTUALLY DO THAT IT'S JUST SO WRONG/WRONG/WRONG...please oh please, I liked jin he was so nice and adorable please oh please update

I have an idea! (Just because I'm really, really upset at Sesshoumaru for hurting imouto-chan. This is more of a rant so you don't have to take it seriously if you don't want.)

The Shikon No Tama is well known for perverting and twists peoples' desires and wishes if they're impure and selfish, right? You've made it quite obvious that Sesshoumaru-tono (-tono is feudal lord by the way) still hate and loathes ningen and finds them disgusting, I don't know if you've mentioned his take on hanyou yet. What if they find out that the Shikon No Tama didn't make -Kagome- barren. It just acted on a subconcious, or maybe not so subconcious, wish of Sesshoumaru's to not have half-breeds running around, but to still have an heir? And, being as the wish ain't that pure, it totally perverted it and made -him- sterile. See how he likes it when -Kagome- needs to sleep with someone else to get an heir.

Sorry, done now. You have a really great story, add soon! And you don't need to listen to me if you don't want. Remember, this is only a rant, you don't have to take it seriously.

I LOVE THIS STORY AND CAANOT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER!!! PLEASE MAKE KAGOME AND STRONG I HATE SEEING HER BEING WEAK(I KNOW THAT THIS IS YOUR STORY, IT'S JUST LATELY EVERY STORY I HAVE BEEN READING SHE GET'S WALKED ALL OVER). MAYBE ADD A LOVE INTEREST FOR HER. MAKE SESSHOMAURU SUFFER!!!! WELL I CANNOT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER!!!

Hi Again!
I tried to put your story on the Recommended Fanfics, but the site would not let me. This is so strange because I have been recommending fics for a long time. Well anyhow, I will try again and hopefully it will be put on the list! I think a well written fic like yours needs to be there! I have told my friends I have found another great story!! So keep up the updates for all of us!!
Sorry about that, but like I said i'll keep trying!
REDWOLF

My heart just breaks right now for Kagome! I hope that she gets to the well and NEVER comes back to Sesshoumaru! It may have been excepted back then, but let's face it Kagome is from another time where it is wrong to do this (Sesshoumaru knew this already), and I hope you send her to the future and it breaks the bond between her and Sesshoumaru and I hope he feels the bond break and that it becomes so unbareable that he has to suffer the next 500 yrs until he sees Kagome again and I also hope that he doesn't get an heir by this woman. But I swear, I could have swore that I read your story( YES, I know it is YOUR story, NOT someone elses, phew.. a person has to be careful when saying stuff because people take it the wrong way, so, I know that you are the ORIGINAL AUTHOR, OK?) before and if I did then when you mean that you are editing it, then the outcome is already set! I think you are a great writer and I know that you will give this story justice! But if I did read it before, does Kagome end up rasing the son as her own and the mother dies or is sent away by Sesshoumaru?? Dog-gone-it that's probably another story I read years ago...well anyhow, can't wait til the next chapter!
A LOYAL Reader,
REDWOLF

Hi there!
Your story is good and since you're asking for help in checking spelling errors I listed the ones I saw:

First Paragraph
3rd sentence: The instead of They
4th sentence: on instead of or

Third to the last paragraph
8th sentence: a instead of an

So there, I hope it helps.
Goodluck with your next chapter.

u...u updated!! ooh i love u so damn much right now!...
that was a great chapter! i love it!
but i still wanna castrate Sesshoumaru with a butter knife right about now...
please update again soon and help me squash these evil plots...

Ja Ne!

Well, first it's well written and interesting. However, I'll wait to the story is complete and see how things turn out for Kagome, before investing anytime in reading it. I like the fact it's different, but taking another wife, sharing Sess not working for me. Kagome returning to the future, then what Sess and new wife show up. Stopping now making myself depress.

I feel so sorry for Kagome, its tearing her apart..........personally I do hope she runs, maybe sesshomaru will realize that he is breaking her heart (again) mmmm thats something to think about too....heres is an idea, the gods grants Kagome her wish, to have a child, she doesnt find out until the next couple of chapters......
I love this story (even if its sad for me) please update soon!

Oh my God!!!! you better update soon. i love the story make sesshoumaru suffer !!! for what hes done to kagome. and make kagome find someone that wil get in the way of sesshoumaru having her back. oh love the story,. !!!!

COMPLETELY DIFFERENT FROM THE ORIGINAL VERSION. Well, I like this version better. Great job, extremely sad situation for Kagome, I can only hope that she does leave him and that he suffers miserably without her. If I were in her situation I would not be able to handle it either (he is acting like Inuyasha). PLEASE bring in a romantic interest for her, or maybe she can find a way to remove his mark. Because something tells me that if she stays in the castle that whore is going to make her life impossible and he won't care, just like he did not care about her feelings when first bringing the demoness to the castle, and to add insult to injury to know that everyone there respects and wants her to have your place would just be too much to bare for me. But anyways great story cannot wait to read the next chapter!!!

I like it so far but you may want to fix the goof I found by correcting Kagome's age in chapter 6 to at least 20 since you said in a previous chapter that S & K had been together for 4 years & then in chapter 6 you list her age as 17, so that would have made her 14 when they got together & she didn't fall down the well until her 15th birthday.

Im proud that Kagome wants to leave, because frankly I don't trust Sesshoumaru right now, and I don't like him either for having the other woman! He knew of Kagome's time and he should not have been with the other woman. Actually, i know they practiced stuff like this back then but it still is terrible and I hope Kagome goes home and sleeps with another!. You know, imagine being tied to someone not only in life but in death as well and having his whore tied to him too! Now that's mean! yes indeed, life sucks right now for Kagome! I would go home and never come back to Sesshoumaru..the ass!

I think Kagome should get a free wish off of the jewel to were Kagome can have childern, and Ketura tries to do something to Kagome and Sessh found out. But PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP.

Hi... i have to say that this story will be really good if in the end you will make it kagome and sesshoumaru only fiction. dont get me wrong i love what you write but i really think it is just not fair if you have to share your mate. like the other reviewers, any woman will be upset if their mate takes other wifes :) i hope you will make it a happy ending story for kagome. anyway i love what you write :)) keep up the good work.

awww...this makes me sad! sesshoumaru took another when he had kagome...even though its just for a heir...it screams DRAMA!!!! makes me fear what is to come cause i think something bad might happen to between kagome and sesshoumaru makes me wanna cry! lol

That was very good but i think Kagome should be a little tougher instead of obeying Sessohmaru's every command like a maid. I also agree with Lady Care, please let her have a baby of her own so she won't have to share her mate with Ketura

Very interestting I do hope that this story gets more cliff hanggers. i wish that in this story that Kagome my some merical will be able to have children I know that this was not part of your story but come on would you like to share your mate with other women I think not!!!!!!!
But other wise very good.