I m curious for the reaction of kagome when she now the true and i really wait zango survive and the expectattives of a new ro.ance with a other demo is sooooo cool
Oh I love this! At first I was highly upset that Sesshomaru ordered someone to kidnap her and then rape her! Though I like it how you kept it from being too much, you know. I was also upset that Sango made up that plan and how Kagome went along it knowing she was pregnant and the fact she wasn't athletic enough to climb anything in her state. You influence our emotions so well, at times I felt mad, happy (sort of) and sadness due Kagome's circumstances. But at the end of Chapter 6, I'm glad the pups survived. :) But Sesshomaru need to come clean soon, it's killing me! Lol. I can't wait for your next update! :)
Phyllis (Chapter 6) - Tue 17 Sep 2013
Very good chapter. My teeth were on edge hoping that she would see Sesshomaru's face, but I had a feeling the suspense would continue. Very well done! I will point out one thing though. You accidentally described Atsuko as an owl yokai in the following sentence, as Kagome is moving toward Sesshomaru:
"Atsuko tried to reach out and pull her Lady back, but the young miko blearily brushed the owl youkai off, as she shakily stood on her feet; slowly making her way to the screen door."
Other than that, it was perfect!! Thanks for the chapter. Can't wait for your next update!!!
I've read all the chapters in a row, and I'm loving this story.
I like the pacing, the portrayals, and the tension that Sesshomaru's absence creates. Also, even with the rape scene in the first chapter, it isn't oo violent a fic or too angsty.
This last chapter was just amazing. Great story.
Phyllis (Chapter 5) - Tue 17 Sep 2013
Excellent chapter! I didn''t think Kagome would willingly drink that tea. As for Sango, she's in for some hard times!
Phyllis (Chapter 4) - Tue 17 Sep 2013
I did not expect him to kill Atsuko. Wow. I fear for the staff at the castle, and for Sango. Very compelling chapter!
Phyllis (Chapter 4) - Tue 17 Sep 2013
I did not expect him to kill Atsuko. Wow. I fear for the staff at the castle, and for Sango. Very compelling chapter!
Phyllis (Chapter 3) - Tue 17 Sep 2013
Another wonderful chapter. I must say it was refreshing to see Inuyasha portrayed more accurately as her friend rather than some careless, cussing idiot who treats Kagome like shit. Thank you for that. I really doubt Inuyasha, even if he didn't have feelings for Kagome, acting in that way. A frustrated Sesshomaru is not someone I want to encounter, lol. And Sango...wow. I wonder how this will play out. Gret job!!
Phyllis (Chapter 2) - Tue 17 Sep 2013
Whoa, what a chapter! Your writing is so good! You catch the reader and keep them in the grip of your story! I am just having the time of my life reading! Great chapter! I would definitely not want to have Atsuko mad at me, let alone Sesshomaru!
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