I do like your style of writing, and i'll admitt that i was a little disappointed with what you did with Sango. I was so hoping that you would write in something about her escape i sure would have liked her to kill that bitch Fumiko. I also would have liked it to hve been Katsutoshi to have to go after her and seen that there was more to Sango than a slayer. however this is your story you write it your way. I would like to know when the hell is Kagome going to kick some ass and make Sesshomaru sorry he ever met her. he needs to work hard for her forgiveness, being a lord he expects everything his way. he should be made to earn forgiveness and respect, there is no honor in what he has done.
smcandy (Chapter 15) - Fri 28 Feb 2014
I hope Kagome finds out what is happening with Sango and tries to save her may she with Sango and her sons can try and escape from Sess?
I look forward to more ^^. I hope Kagome keeps us the resistance until Sess can change his way for the better and prove otherwise to Kagome so that she can finaly forgive him if possible? SO far you have shown the best portray of Kages when she is loathing someone like Sess in this story. The same can be Said for Sess staying in best IC as you can for this.
Update again keep up the good work.
Sincerely,
Authoress smcandy
I hope Kagome keep fighting him.
This is the most f*cked up story I had ever read....I dont mean it in a mean way but jeez no one can get a break! InuYasha was killed miroku was killed(I think)sango was beaten taken and is now a prostitute kagome was raped and now has to obey Sesshoumaru she thinks Sango is dead when she really isnt...its like not a good look at all and all because Sesshoumaru wanted power? I hope he fucking dies...like the worse death imaginable hes freaking psycho !
Okay im done venting...truly its a remarkable story and i literally couldnt stop readig no matter how irritated i became with the characters I really hope Kagome gets Sesshoaru back for all ths shit..he doesnt deserve her for real
InumeT
Great chapters, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!
Okay now he is ticking me off. He cannot keep forcing her because all she is going to do is hate him no matter what he does. He better learn that or nothing will change.
tonya (Chapter 15) - Thu 27 Feb 2014
cant wait for next update!
Nile (Chapter 15) - Thu 27 Feb 2014
Truthfully, I really hope she never accepts Sesshoumaru unless she is broken and laying around, like one of those mental patients that all the do is sit or lay and look like nobody is hope. It's not right or acceptable, and wouldn't be congruent with Kagome's character. She is an all or nothing kind of girl.
It would really be great if Sango found a way to kill her clients by chopping off their heads and throwing them at Katsutoshi's feet every time. Maybe, have her beat the crap out of Fumiko. Sango's probably thinking 'there is no honor in being a whore'. Hopefully, she could even burn the brothel to the ground. That's my opinion. Can't wait for the next chapter though. I hope Inuyasha and Kouga find peace in the afterlife at least.
Bring it on.i am never sick of lemons. Make a kagome orgy. A sango orgy. Miroku sabbath. Public punishment. I can take it allinuyasha
Ana (Chapter 15) - Thu 27 Feb 2014
This is not gonna end well for Kagome :(
Thank you for the update! <3
rose (Chapter 15) - Thu 27 Feb 2014
next chapter please
loving your story so much right now
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Getting very intense and sweet in a way. I know they will have hard times but they will make it through....he just has to show her and make her see....without force that he really loves her. Getting rid of the rosary would have to be one of those things though....you do not cage the one you love. A butterfly is made to fly free and spread it's beauty...not be placed in a jar where it will eventually die. Beautiful preview and song(Stronger) btw....*makes a chest motion* All up in the feels with those. Great job.
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